Can you help me understand this History question?
Hi, I have a 12-15 page essay to do and I need you to add five more pages. I will upload what I have so far. If you can refine and revise it as well, I will add a VERY generous tip but if not, then you can just add to what I have.
My research paper will focus on the numerous methods of bloodletting (go back and forth discussion the good and bad things with EACHeach method and why leech therapy is better AND HOW METHODS CHANGED OVERTIME AND WHY BASED CHINESE AND ANCIENT GREEK TRADITIONS), different views on leech therapy and how it plays in the practice of bloodletting under the humoral theory in China and Ancient Greece, and the pros and cons of Hirudotherapy (leech therapy) oNCE AGAIN PLEASE GO BACK BETWEEN ANCIENT GREECE AND CHINESE TRADITIONS.
For each paragraph/ topic, IT IS ESSENTIAL to go back and forth between the ancient greek traditions and Chinese traditions.
FORMAT: (Times new roman, font 12)
-Introduction (a roadmap of the paper): topic/scope and STRONG thesis statement
-Main text: arguments and evidence; minding the relevance between each paragraph, in relation with the whole argument; transitional terms; one idea in one paragraph
-Scholarship: to emphasize the significance of the paper
– STRONG Conclusion
ONCE AGAIN, if you can revise and refine what I already have, I will include a VERY generous tip.
This can help with format :
Scope: time span and the location
Of the different cultures
State research question
Thesis statement: answer the research question
Example: social aspect or political aspect of the topic
Main text / Body Paragraphs
Also can be used to help show evidence
2-3 pages for each topic for the evidence
Make a claim for the evidence and use quotes to support that.
When going to next paragraph add a good transition
Evidence and so on
Make sure not to add irrelevant aspects
Restate thesis statements
Summarize what had been said
At least use one of the 3 trends of scholarships in the conclusion:
What is the nature of knowledge?
What are the modes of knowledge production?
What is the way knowledge is transmitted?
Choose at least one maybe even two
Evaluation: further research of relevant times
Works Cited / Bibliography
Must be author and date style