Revise my Rough Draft

I don’t know how to handle this English question and need guidance.

Your task is to write a final draft of my rough draft.

1) read “GOING GREEN” BY SHAWN HOLTON pages 267-271 pages 267-271

2) Read the assignment…

3) Revise my rough draft…

Teachers note: This is a strong start. Please make sure you do the following: Add direct quotes and examples to all points. Add analysis that ties each example to the thesis and map of points. Be sure your thesis and preview of points is solid and matches each part of the essay. Ask yourself all the questions on this checklist, and be sure to follow the guidelines for the assignment.